Slann
Killer Angel
Prophet of the Stars
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I spot one extra vote applied since I last checked... and it did not break the current 3-way tie.![]()
The irony...
I spot one extra vote applied since I last checked... and it did not break the current 3-way tie.![]()
At least they all have at least one vote now thoughI spot one extra vote applied since I last checked... and it did not break the current 3-way tie.![]()
At least they all have at least one vote now though
It would require another round of votings, restricted to those 3 stories.
Also @J.Logan that was a really good tale. I very much enjoyed it. I hope you plan on expanding it now XD
I can envision some fun shenanigans with a skaven styling himself as a Victorian gentlemen-professor as a villain.
An End Times story; very cleverly crafted. At first I was wondering how the Lizardmen would act on the attack and the assassin within their walls. The downward pressure seemed strange, but with the first ‘intercom’ message it was clearly because of the take-off from the dying World-that-was. Suspense in the end if the Rat-assassin will ever succeed in his endeavor. Surprising piece, written from a fun perspective.
My misgiving is pretty small. I’d like to know a little bit more about the point of view character. I’m not sure what clan the Skaven is from. Eshin, is my best guest but he referenced other clans frequently. Skaven don’t normally have this level of stoicism and self control. A little bit of backstory would have helped me understand him better. Did he realize that even if his mission succeeded, he would be trapped and unable to return home or did he not care? That’s rattling about my head.
I guess I haven't got one yet, I'm open to suggestions (via Private Message)
lol... it seems there has been a misunderstanding between me and @Imrahil, regarding who was supposed to pm you.![]()