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That's great and all, but the writer still needs to explain to the reader why this particular action was a "sacrifice your queen to achieve checkmate"-move that was important to maintain the great plan. Yes the great plan is alien, and yes we will never really understand it. But we still need a better explenation than the writer just going "cuz I say so".
Show us a hint of their future move. Show us a kink in the plans of be'lakor. Show us Tzeentch and Archaon getting ready to bring be'lakor down a peg or two. Show us why that 1 gaunt summoner is apparently worth an entire realm. Have a SCE remark something about how happy he is that at least that gaunt summoner is dead and they can just rebuild the realm with time. Just something that could possibily be interpreted as "positive" within the great plan.
I think it does pretty clearly lay out Kroak out-planning Bel'akor, Kroak succeeds in destroying Eater of Tomes and shutting down Archaon's Varanite + anti-stormcast shrines (plus brings the old skink chief that was killed launching the thunder lizards assault back to life, in the old remade-from-memories thing, because he still needs him for something) and then shifts the pieces around so Bel'akor's plans are cut short at the last moment.
Gardus is given a crisis of faith by having the seraphon ignore him in defense of the genesis gate, and his later prayer for guidence is intercepted by Kroak, where he's shown a huge swath of future events (the fall of excelsis, the destruction of Chamon by Bel'akor) and told where he has to go to divert their course, or where he needs to be to mitigate them at the very least. Gardus' then presence in Vindicarum prevents the city from immediately falling to Bel'akor and the Nighthaunt's assault, and though it isn't enough to win it's enough to draw the whole thing out long enough for the White Dwarf to unify the entire Kharadron skyfleet, and come to their aid. With the airfleet's help it's enough to win out and humiliate Bel'akor in front of the dark gods, ruining whatever followup he had.
The black clouds preventing reforging, the devestated vindicarum (though it will rebuild, the kharadron are counting on it to recoup the losses they took with fresh trade agreements) and the destroyed realmgates in chamon (just key ones, necessary for the clouds, not all of them like the first review claimed) are bad for Order, but it's a bruising compared to the knife to the stomach Bel'akor would've inflicted with his plan going off without a hitch. Chamon is bruised, two stormhosts are mauled while one is entirely destroyed, the Thunder Lizards have taken some solid blows, but in return one domino has shifted to avert the visions Gardus was granted, the unification of the duardin is one step closer, Bel'akor's plan is cut short at the end, and Chamon can start the struggle to rebuild
