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Contest July-August 2023 Short Story Contest Voting Thread

Which story did you like best? (You may choose ONE)

  • Story One: "Future Yet to Come"

    Votes: 3 25.0%
  • Story Two: "The Nightbringer"

    Votes: 6 50.0%
  • Story Three: "Unnoticed Presence"

    Votes: 1 8.3%
  • Story Four: "Avant-Garde"

    Votes: 2 16.7%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
A bold move by you. A bold move that paid dividends.


When you have roamed through the chaos realms...
when you have visited the lands of the chaos dwarfs...
then it's time to boldly go where no man has gone before. :D

Alas from now on, i struggle to see higher goals. :p

This should have tipped me off that the story was penned by you. Being the sportsman that you are, if it were someone else's story, it is highly unlikely that you would have suggested even the possibility of a counter-action/vote. I should have seen it but I was too distracted by the glitz and glamour of the mighty THE NIGHTBRINGER story.

I tip my hat to you, good sir. :)
 
The build up was good, but had a very abrupt climax in my opinion. The concept of chaos influencing the ‘intelligent’ through the source of their intelligence is great and I would have liked this story to be longer.

I basically wrote the story in a single day, just one day before the deadline (already extended).
Being in a rush, there wasn't too much time to expand the piece as i would have liked. :p
 
I basically wrote the story in a single day, just one day before the deadline (already extended).
Being in a rush, there wasn't too much time to expand the piece as i would have liked. :p
And yet you still managed to capture 50% of the total vote. Such is the awesome awe-inspiring power of THE NIGHTBRINGER. It was one of the more decisive short story contest victories.


(yes, I'm having a great deal of fun with this) :)
 
As I've already probably over-advocated the inclusion of Chaos Dwarfs, why not honour your heritage and put forth a Tomb Kings theme? The Southlands versus Nehekhara might be fun.

I'd say you can make it happen, just start writing ;)

Grrr, !mrahil
 
I'd say you can make it happen, just start writing ;)

Grrr, !mrahil
Just a helpful suggestion. I've already got the Chaos Dwarfs and NIGHTBRINGER incorporated into stories without ever having to put metaphorical pen to paper.
 
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