8th Ed. 4000: Please Critique

[Hookadoodle]

Slann
Mystery
Rumination
Becalming Cogitation
BSB
Feedback Scroll
Bane Head
Lore : Life


Oldblood
Carnosaur
Blade of Revered Tzunki
The Maiming Shield
Gambler's Armor
Luck Stone


Scar - Veteran (Temple Guard)
Dragon Helm
Burning Blade of Chotec
Light Armour
Shield

Scar - Veteran (Spears)
Ogre Blade
Light Armour
Shield


Skink Priest
Level 2
Cloak of Feathers




Skink Priest
Level 2
Engine of the Gods
Dispel Scroll
Plaque of Tepok


Skink Chief
Stegadon War - Spear
Ancient Stegadon
Light Armour
Shield


Temple Guard (19)
Musician & Standard
Razor Standard

Saurus Warriors (20) 5 x 4
Musician & Standard

Saurus Warriors (20) 5 x 4
Musician & Standard

Saurus Warriors (29) 6 x 5
Musician & Standard
Spears

Skink (28)
3 Kroxigor
Musician & Standard


Skink Skirmishers (10)


Skink Skirmishers (10)


Skink Skirmishers (10)


Skink Skirmishers (10)


Chameleon Skinks (6)


Salamander


Salamander

Total
4178

So yea, my opponents would be primarily Vampires and Ogres. PLease critique! Havent really played a game so its kinda hard to say whether this is a strong list.

Thanks again!

 

[SeBM]

IMO, at 4000 pts, you need way bigger blocks of infrantry. 20 Saurus isn't big enough when you might be facing 80+ strong blocks of stuff!!!! So, considering you are playing a 4000 pts battle, here is what I would do.

- Drop some characters! If you want to keep the EoTG priest, thats fine, but drop the other priest, the skink chief and a scar-vet. You really dont need a biliion characters.

- Boost those saurus blocks and that TG block. TG at 30 (that one may be overkill), Saurus at 30+.

- More chameleons. Playing VC and Ogres means little to no warmachines but having the ennemy run after your chameleons is a really good thing. You could also take a unit of terradon to hunt down characters/lone mages.

- At 4k pts, you are very likely to fight huge blocks of infantry. 2 additionnal salamanders would really help out thinning down yhe ennemy's number before you engage in battle.


I'm sure other posters will have more insightful comments about your army. Good luck with it!