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I like all Star Trek except for STD, but I really like Deep Space Nine more than the others. I was rewatching the series and just for fun, I started writing down every unspeakably awful thing that happens to Miles O'Brien. If you really hate spoilers, and haven't watched DS9 stop reading now because I'm going to build on DS9 a lot.
It's a testament to his strength of spirit that he is a highly competent Starfleet officer and not gibbering to himself in a padded cell.
There was an episode where Mile's eight year old daughter, Molly, falls into a time anomally and ends up 300 years in the past. She survives ten years by herself on a wilderness planet and came back a feral wild child. Because it involves a time anomally they were able to hit the reset button and return Molly to eight years old. Still, I couldn't help thinking. "This girl is a badass surviving that long in the wilderness completely by herself." She was also a great athlete and capable of beating people up.
I thought, what if she kept the indominantible spirit and boundless creativity and combined it with formal Starfleet training? She would be a demigod. If she inherits her father's trait of being a cosmic magnet for interesting but difficult life events, there would be infinite story potential for her.
I want an adult Molly O'Brien to be the lead character on a Star Trek series that is a direct sequel to Deep Space Nine, probably as the captain, but I would be okay if she were the first officer.
So Commander Molly O'Brien is the anchor for the cast. What is the main story? Exploration or Politics?
Both
A Plot
At the end of Deep Space Nine, the Dominion surrenders to the Federation and presumably stops brutalizing people with the Jem Hadar.
This means the Gamma Quadrant is now fully safe for the Federation and their allies to fully explore, but it also means that all the petty warlords, criminals, and despots that until recently were kept in line by the Dominion are now unleashed.
If you feel like you absolutely need to create a new megavillain to replace the Dominion or the Borg, then you can easily justify a new Big Bad in the Gamma Quadrant.
B Plot
At the end of DS9 there was tons of positive wheels in motion.
-Bajor is on track to become a full member of the Federation and they are moving towards peaceful cooperation with their old enemies Cardassia.
-The Ferenghi are turning over a new leaf and showing more compassion
-The Cardassians are turning over a new leaf and respecting individual freedom and peaceful diplomacy more.
-The Klingons are trying to root out corruption and focusing on real honor and not just the pretext of honor.
-The Romulans are to a lesser extant, trying to be more open and less duplicitous.
-The Breen used to exist on the fringes, now they can't hide in the background anymore.
-The Federation has begun building purely military ships. They are also trying to purge Section 31 from their ranks.
-The Dominion has begun acting less interventionalist
All these things are generally positive, but every one of these societies is going to have hardline Conservatives that want to return things to how they were before. They are each going to have hardline Progressives who want to see much larger reforms. There are going to be third party groups poking around the territories of these powers hoping to get power, and wealth by playing factions against each other.
All these disaprate groups are going to be pushing against each other. You could have civil wars and emerging terrorist groups. Not every conflict need be violent. You can have meddling beuaracrats, slimy con artists, and cold hearted mercenaries stirring up trouble.
There is no shortage of political conflict and it would be very easy to set up red herrings. You can also have a lot of reluctant allies of convenience. What if Bajoran and Cardassian extremists opted to work together to sabotage their own governments so they could get back to killing each other unknowing that the Breen and Romulans are pulling their puppet strings?
While I think Molly O'Brien would be a fantastic protagonist. Star Trek needs an ensemble to be at it's best. I'm figuring Molly O'Brien would daring and prone to taking risks. It's tradition to make the captain and the first officer compliments with different styles. The deuteragonist, should be cautious and methodical. That's sort of the Star Trek formula. The captain and first officer have opposite but complimentary personalities.
I would be thrilled if the previous cast members of DS9 made cameos once in a while, but I don't think we need to put any on the main cast. The most logical character to reintroduce after a 20 year time skip would be Nog because his career was just taking off. The problem is, Aron Eisenberg, the actor who plays Nog, was actually older than most of the rest of the cast and played young. He's in his fifties now. It mgiht be weird for him to play somone in his thirties or he might be sick of Star Trek by now. I would not be opposed to giving him a protege. The second Ferengi in Starfleet has to fight through all the Ferengi prejudice, but would get less coddling because he (or she I suppose) is not the exciting first one.
Worf's son Alexander might be an interesting foil to Molly O'Brien. Molly is a human with the soul of a warrior and Alexander is a Klingon with the soul of a diplomat. But the fan base doesn't really like him much, so that's probably not a good casting choice.
I really didn't like Ezri Dax, but she's much older now. I might like her more as a wise matron than a wide eyed youth.
I really want to follow Bajor's growth, so I'd like to see a Bajoran on the main cast. How about make the doctor a Bajoran. The Bajoran doctor would be very knowledgeable but also prone to pray for healing too. This could create a philosophical divide with the chief engineer or the chief science officer but eventually they become friends and respect each other's viewpoints.
Most versions of Star Trek have a Pinnochio character of some sort or someone with split heritage. On some level Molly has split Japanese/Irish heritage but in the Star Trek universe that is not a big deal. You could justify adding a friendly changeling to the cast, but it woudl be hard to top Odo. I would add a Jem'hadar or Vorta that is trying to assert his/her independence. Though one could easily invent a new alien or shake the dust off one of the one-off forgotten aliens.
If we need a split heritage character, I would create a Bajoran/Cardassian half-breed who doesn't fit into either society very well and hoped to find a new identity in Starfleet. He or she (probably she because Star Trek's handlers like to make halflings sexy females) would be a great way to introduce subplots from both Bajor and Cardassia.
Star Trek doesn't like to introduce non-sexy female characters, but a female Ferengi in Starfleet that is doubly pushing against her societal norms might be interesting though I'd be concerned that her character arc would get completely hijacked by SJWs in a bad way.
I liked Garok and Quark providing an outsider's view of the Federation in DS9. I liked Kes and Neelix providing an outsider's view of the Federation in Voyager. I think I would like to add a mostly friendly but not fully trusted Romulan character for this story niche.
With all these exotic characters, it's probably okay to round out the cast with some normal humans, as long as they have good actors and reasonable character arcs.
So the captain is the fearless and bold Molly O'Brien
The first officer is a no-nonense by the book human. Maybe s/he can be much older than Molly but he is outranked by Molly because he joined Starfleet late in life as a second career. It just so happens that he has some skeletons in his closet from his first job that will come up from time to time.
Chief Medical officer is a spirital Bajoran who believes in holistic medicine in addition to advanced science.
Chief science officer is a human. Maybe a love interest to Molly O'Brien or the chief medical officer.
Head of security is a new breed of Jem'Hadar created to mend fences with the Alpha Quadrant.
The loveable scamp is a miserly Romulan quartermaster.
Fill in two or three more characters and we got a show.
It's a testament to his strength of spirit that he is a highly competent Starfleet officer and not gibbering to himself in a padded cell.
There was an episode where Mile's eight year old daughter, Molly, falls into a time anomally and ends up 300 years in the past. She survives ten years by herself on a wilderness planet and came back a feral wild child. Because it involves a time anomally they were able to hit the reset button and return Molly to eight years old. Still, I couldn't help thinking. "This girl is a badass surviving that long in the wilderness completely by herself." She was also a great athlete and capable of beating people up.
I thought, what if she kept the indominantible spirit and boundless creativity and combined it with formal Starfleet training? She would be a demigod. If she inherits her father's trait of being a cosmic magnet for interesting but difficult life events, there would be infinite story potential for her.
I want an adult Molly O'Brien to be the lead character on a Star Trek series that is a direct sequel to Deep Space Nine, probably as the captain, but I would be okay if she were the first officer.
So Commander Molly O'Brien is the anchor for the cast. What is the main story? Exploration or Politics?
Both
A Plot
At the end of Deep Space Nine, the Dominion surrenders to the Federation and presumably stops brutalizing people with the Jem Hadar.
This means the Gamma Quadrant is now fully safe for the Federation and their allies to fully explore, but it also means that all the petty warlords, criminals, and despots that until recently were kept in line by the Dominion are now unleashed.
If you feel like you absolutely need to create a new megavillain to replace the Dominion or the Borg, then you can easily justify a new Big Bad in the Gamma Quadrant.
B Plot
At the end of DS9 there was tons of positive wheels in motion.
-Bajor is on track to become a full member of the Federation and they are moving towards peaceful cooperation with their old enemies Cardassia.
-The Ferenghi are turning over a new leaf and showing more compassion
-The Cardassians are turning over a new leaf and respecting individual freedom and peaceful diplomacy more.
-The Klingons are trying to root out corruption and focusing on real honor and not just the pretext of honor.
-The Romulans are to a lesser extant, trying to be more open and less duplicitous.
-The Breen used to exist on the fringes, now they can't hide in the background anymore.
-The Federation has begun building purely military ships. They are also trying to purge Section 31 from their ranks.
-The Dominion has begun acting less interventionalist
All these things are generally positive, but every one of these societies is going to have hardline Conservatives that want to return things to how they were before. They are each going to have hardline Progressives who want to see much larger reforms. There are going to be third party groups poking around the territories of these powers hoping to get power, and wealth by playing factions against each other.
All these disaprate groups are going to be pushing against each other. You could have civil wars and emerging terrorist groups. Not every conflict need be violent. You can have meddling beuaracrats, slimy con artists, and cold hearted mercenaries stirring up trouble.
There is no shortage of political conflict and it would be very easy to set up red herrings. You can also have a lot of reluctant allies of convenience. What if Bajoran and Cardassian extremists opted to work together to sabotage their own governments so they could get back to killing each other unknowing that the Breen and Romulans are pulling their puppet strings?
While I think Molly O'Brien would be a fantastic protagonist. Star Trek needs an ensemble to be at it's best. I'm figuring Molly O'Brien would daring and prone to taking risks. It's tradition to make the captain and the first officer compliments with different styles. The deuteragonist, should be cautious and methodical. That's sort of the Star Trek formula. The captain and first officer have opposite but complimentary personalities.
I would be thrilled if the previous cast members of DS9 made cameos once in a while, but I don't think we need to put any on the main cast. The most logical character to reintroduce after a 20 year time skip would be Nog because his career was just taking off. The problem is, Aron Eisenberg, the actor who plays Nog, was actually older than most of the rest of the cast and played young. He's in his fifties now. It mgiht be weird for him to play somone in his thirties or he might be sick of Star Trek by now. I would not be opposed to giving him a protege. The second Ferengi in Starfleet has to fight through all the Ferengi prejudice, but would get less coddling because he (or she I suppose) is not the exciting first one.
Worf's son Alexander might be an interesting foil to Molly O'Brien. Molly is a human with the soul of a warrior and Alexander is a Klingon with the soul of a diplomat. But the fan base doesn't really like him much, so that's probably not a good casting choice.
I really didn't like Ezri Dax, but she's much older now. I might like her more as a wise matron than a wide eyed youth.
I really want to follow Bajor's growth, so I'd like to see a Bajoran on the main cast. How about make the doctor a Bajoran. The Bajoran doctor would be very knowledgeable but also prone to pray for healing too. This could create a philosophical divide with the chief engineer or the chief science officer but eventually they become friends and respect each other's viewpoints.
Most versions of Star Trek have a Pinnochio character of some sort or someone with split heritage. On some level Molly has split Japanese/Irish heritage but in the Star Trek universe that is not a big deal. You could justify adding a friendly changeling to the cast, but it woudl be hard to top Odo. I would add a Jem'hadar or Vorta that is trying to assert his/her independence. Though one could easily invent a new alien or shake the dust off one of the one-off forgotten aliens.
If we need a split heritage character, I would create a Bajoran/Cardassian half-breed who doesn't fit into either society very well and hoped to find a new identity in Starfleet. He or she (probably she because Star Trek's handlers like to make halflings sexy females) would be a great way to introduce subplots from both Bajor and Cardassia.
Star Trek doesn't like to introduce non-sexy female characters, but a female Ferengi in Starfleet that is doubly pushing against her societal norms might be interesting though I'd be concerned that her character arc would get completely hijacked by SJWs in a bad way.
I liked Garok and Quark providing an outsider's view of the Federation in DS9. I liked Kes and Neelix providing an outsider's view of the Federation in Voyager. I think I would like to add a mostly friendly but not fully trusted Romulan character for this story niche.
With all these exotic characters, it's probably okay to round out the cast with some normal humans, as long as they have good actors and reasonable character arcs.
So the captain is the fearless and bold Molly O'Brien
The first officer is a no-nonense by the book human. Maybe s/he can be much older than Molly but he is outranked by Molly because he joined Starfleet late in life as a second career. It just so happens that he has some skeletons in his closet from his first job that will come up from time to time.
Chief Medical officer is a spirital Bajoran who believes in holistic medicine in addition to advanced science.
Chief science officer is a human. Maybe a love interest to Molly O'Brien or the chief medical officer.
Head of security is a new breed of Jem'Hadar created to mend fences with the Alpha Quadrant.
The loveable scamp is a miserly Romulan quartermaster.
Fill in two or three more characters and we got a show.