8th Ed. 1500 pts function or not?

[i play whfb]

lords-
slann
focus of mystery,focused rumination,higher state of conciousness

lord total= (375) pts

heroes-
skink priest plaque of tepok
eotg

hero total = (370) pts

core-
20 saurus w/ spears and full cmd
10 skirmishers w/blowpipe and brave
10 skirmishers w/blowpipe and brave

core total- (424) pts

special-
3 kroxigor

special total= (165) pts

rare-
2 salamander hunting packs 3 extra handlers

rare total= (165) pts

total=1499 pts

try not to kill me with critism but help is needed becuz no1s perfect. havent came up with an exact strategy for this list but just buy looking at it do you guys think it will function? thanks!

 

[1968yearofmetall]

first, i would place my kroxigors in a unit of skinks as they will have to take a panic test right away if only 1 kroxigor is killed othervise.
also, you can only add upp tp 1 extra handler per salamander.
only 20 suarus is too small imo. try to fit in some chamo skinks as well to take down warmachines.
I´m also interrested in what lore you are using for the slann. i´d go with heavens as the priest is too.
even the smallest skink priest can kill a character with a thunderbold or so.